Jun 04 2012

Succinctly Yours: Week 63

Category: MemesLindsay @ 10:05 pm

Well, my catching up by writing two entries in one week last week was a fail, but perhaps I can just stay on track for this week.

This week’s story is called “Generations”.


Waves lapped as the boat resettled. “Well,” said Junior, finally. “Things like this don’t happen to real people. Like the movies, that is.”

“The one that got away?” said Senior.

“Yep. The one that really did get away. At least this makes a good story for you there, ey, Tripp?”

“Sure, Dad. Stories are good,” said the boy. The funny stories were really the only good part. Grampa nearly being struck by a renegade seagull. Dad forgetting to bring a bottle opener.

There were other good times, too, though. Grampa singing his favorites from the old days. Dad showing his son how to tie a lure. He himself, the littlest John Phillip Davidson, learning patience and contentment waiting for a bite. The together part was good, too, but he wouldn’t know that until a few more years had floated by.
(140 words)

This one’s a bit more serious than the others, but I’m enjoying the opportunity to get a totally new writing prompt every week. Oh, there you are, writing muscles.

Check out Grandma’s Goulash for more succinct stories.

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May 30 2012

Succinctly Yours: Week 61

Category: MemesLindsay @ 10:58 pm

Well, it’s Wednesday, and I’m two weeks behind, so I’ll have a go at two weeks’ worth of drabbles tonight. Maybe it’s a good idea I didn’t decide to call this meme Microfiction Monday.

Looking back through previous weeks, I think “Grandma” gets her photos from people who offer them or from the public domain. This works out well for me because here’s a kitty!

This week’s story is called “Zack Attack.” I dedicate this one my friend Sabrina and the real Zack Attack.


“Sports fans, welcome to another installment of Zack Attack! Our faithful feline explorer extraordinaire journeys each week through the Miller House.”

“Today, Zack’s sojourns take him to James’s room. He’s grown from a tiny tot to a maverick man of soccer. Tim, tell us what you’re seeing here.”

“Well, Scott, check out that leap from floor to bedspread! Great form! You can tell Zack’s aerodynamic control has improved.”

“About as much as James’s ball control over the years. Ha, ha! Oh, for the days of peewee league.”

“What’s this? He’s going for the soccer ball. A little pawing, a little more, he’s hesitant, but—oh! Up and over! Zack Attack is on the ball, sports fans, in more ways than one.”

“And now he’s off. What a thrill. What will he get up to next, in another great Zack Attack?”
(140 words)


That was fun. I wrote a little more and edited it down to fit the word requirement. Check out Grandma’s Goulash for more succinct stories.

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May 14 2012

Succinctly Yours: Week 60

Category: MemesLindsay @ 10:17 pm

Look at me, participating in a new meme two weeks in a row! Hooray! This week, I give you “Look Who’s Talking.”
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“Mom? Mommy? Where did you go? Are you in the kitchen? No. Okay, how about in the big chair? No. Where’s Mommy? Grandpa, where’s Mommy? How do I make her come? I usually—oh, I usually can cry. Let’s try that.”

The old man closed the door, waving, calling out goodbyes. Turning, he found his granddaughter in the middle of the floor, lip quivering, just shy of wailing.

Nope, not just shy anymore. Actually wailing. Leaning on his carved cane for support, he shuffled to the diaper bag and found the pacifier. With a few soothing words for good measure, he tried to calm the girl.

“No, not passy-fier. Mommy! Mommy is what I want! Don’t give me that thing! Why don’t—mmnm, hrmm—ptui–why don’t you ever understand me?”

This was a language barrier for the ages. (140 words)

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May 07 2012

Succinctly Yours: Week 59

Category: MemesLindsay @ 6:14 pm

I’m determined to get a good Monday posting habit going. Maybe another meme will help with that.

From this week’s prompt at Grandma’s Goulash, I give you “The Princess’s Dilemma.”
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“Mommy, I want to be a princess!”

“Oh?” replied the mother, refolding her newspaper. “And why is that, darling?”

She twirled in the midmorning sunlight. “Because a princess is the prettiest girl in all the land, and when she grows up, she becomes the queen!”

Slowly ending her spin, she dropped her chin and added, mumbling, “And she never has another princess coming along to get in the way.”

The mother gave a small smile, set her newspaper away, and eased her way out of the rocker, one hand on the belly that grew more cumbersome with each day.

“My dear,” she said, cradling the pretend princess, “you have nothing to fear. A mother’s love grows right along with the size of her family! And besides that, every princess needs a lady-in-waiting.”

She grinned even more and twirled away once again, back into her dreamland.

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Oct 03 2009

On Writing Less

Category: SchoolLindsay @ 10:52 am

I’ve come across some interesting points to chew on in my recreational reading lately. (Despite all odds, I just barely manage to squeeze non-academic reading in on top of all my schoolwork.) The first relates to my work, actually, so it seems like a noble use of my scant time. From the NCTE Inbox newsletter came a link to an Inside Higher Ed essay by Scott Jaschick on the trend of less writing on college application essays. Jaschick writes that some colleges, particularly those that use the Common Application, are de-emphasizing or eliminating the traditional long application essay in favor of shorter questions. Admissions staff say that the short questions tend to have more direct answers and show fewer signs of coaching, so they can get a better picture of the applicant through fewer words. Several commenters suggest that the true benefit is to the admissions officers, since they simply don’t have to read as much when applicants don’t write as much.

I find myself torn on the issue. I teach essay writing, so I know that students can express themselves a lot more fully when they are “allowed” (read: required) to write more. However, though some of my students are crack hands at writing paragraphs, they are struggling greatly with essay writing. They simply can’t break free of the strictly defined format of a good paragraph enough to expand it into an essay. I coach them as best I can, but simultaneously find myself drowning in the volume of writing that sixty students can produce in twenty to forty minutes a day. In that respect, I prefer the paragraph to the essay, but I know the essays are essential as well.

Thinking back to my own college applications, I used an essay I’d written for my AP English Literature class on as many applications as possible. The cookie-cutter “choose your own topic” long essay question invited that tactic. However, on the short questions (I think Maryland called them “Finding Your Niche”), I had to compose answers specific to the information needs of the school. Those questions ultimately led me to join Honors Humanities: a decision I have yet to regret.

Are college application essays walking the path toward extinction? I don’t think so; if you can’t write an essay by the time you’re a senior, you have no business in college, and even coached essays will help you realize that (or demonstrate the lack of that skill). But I can see short questions becoming more popular. I prefer them on my tests. Getting into college is, in some ways, just another test.

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Apr 04 2008

Why Grammar Matters

Category: GeneralLindsay @ 10:45 pm

Lemony Snicket’s Series of Unfortunate Events—the movie—holds a special place in my heart. Aunt Josephine reminds me of me; that is, the often paranoid grammar lover. Grammar isn’t the greatest joy in life, but it’s pretty darn cool. As a bonus, you look much smarter if you avoid making common mistakes (very slight language warning). My heart dies a little bit when I see an allegedly professional document with “loose” where “lose” was meant. It’s really not that difficult to understand that “could of” is always wrong.

This has been a public service announcement from your favorite unofficial Grammar Girl.

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Feb 09 2008

Love Is Kryptonite

Category: GeneralLindsay @ 3:42 pm

A former teacher of mine, now a coworker in a strange sense, won the WashPo Magazine‘s 2007 Valentine’s Fiction Contest back in July. His story, “Love Is Kryptonite,” was just published in this weekend’s edition.

Arguments over what name to give February 14 aside, it’s a really fabulous story. Dean is an interesting guy in the truest sense of the word. I love the voice of his narrator. It’s a very Deanlike way to tell a story.

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Feb 01 2008

Catholic Carnival 157

Category: Catholic Carnival,General,WordPressLindsay @ 11:02 pm

Kate Wicker hosted the Catholic Carnival this week. She has a great “Feast Before the Fast” theme, since Ash Wednesday is next week. I’m not quite ready. We just finished celebrating Christmas!

I submitted a post to the Carnival again, the one about FOCUS Conference, which I also sent to our five FOCUS missionaries. Imagine my embarrassment when, of all days, WP started malfunctioning on Tuesday. I got everything fixed by the end of the day, but I’m still not quite what went wrong. Something about the redirect from my hostess wasn’t working properly, but it’s all good now.

Jen at Daughter of the King ponders her spiritual game plan for this Lent. Last Lent went very well for me. I gave up secular tv and watched a lot of EWTN instead. I resumed praying the rosary every day; I tend to fall in and out of the habit.

My crowning achievement seems strange at first: For Lent, I resolved to take never pass up vegetables. I did this not because, as Fr. Frank lamented, I see Lent as a diet plan. I did it because I realized that food was one area of my life that I hadn’t yet given over to God. I needed to grow up, be healthier, and stop being so picky. Those first few salads and broccoli florets were tough, but I’m so much better for it. I was humiliated to admit my childishness and do something I absolutely did not want to do. Now, not only do I eat vegetables, I also like red and green apples, and I’m working on oranges. Soon I’ll eat the whole pyramid!

I haven’t definitely decided what to do for this Lent. Unfortunately, I am running out of time.

Finally, Heidi at Silent Canticle gives us her thoughts about writing for free. I don’t blog for the glory of God any more than I do everything for God. Blogging for God sounds like it could go the way of Christ the Lord. I’ve never written anything for pay, though, and I copyedit for free (except at CASL, where I was paid hourly regardless of how much work I did). I blog as an extension of the personal journals I’ve kept since middle school. She makes a good point about using the talents God has given us, though. The few posts I’ve had that seem to have really reached people make the whole process worth it.

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